Another GolfNow email FAIL - who is this from?
It must have been a bad day at GolfNow Email Central. With so many clients, they just can't seem to match the "From" line with the message. Little Mountain and StoneWater might have common ownership, but don't you think StoneWater should have its own "From" address?
Can we use a smaller font than that in the first paragraph? How about multiple spelling and grammar errors? Are three question marks better than one?(??)
Wait, I got it. Maybe this is what happens when you drink too much StoneWater. I found it at Whole Foods, $7.99 for an eight-ounce bottle. Drinking it now.
From: Little Mountain Country Club <This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it.
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Date: October 7, 2015 at 5:52:16 PM EDT
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Subject: StoneWater Golf Club Member For A Day
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Attention Golfers,
Have you heard about what’s going on at StoneWater Golf Club this Fall and 2016??? You do not want to miss out on this unbelievable offer!
Right now, we are in the middle of our biggest Membership Drive all year. We want YOU to experience what we have to offer at StoneWater and also find out about our exciting Membership offerings for 2016. Effective immediately, and running for the rest of the season, we will be offering our Member for a Day opportunity to you for only $45 cart included plus tax.
ook your round now. Upon check-in, you will also be able to learn about information for next year as part of your Member for a Day Experience. If the time that you are looking for is not available, feel free to contact the StoneWater Golf Shop to check on further availability.
With the tremendous Fall weather that we’ve had, our early Fall aerification healed over perfect. The greens are in fantastic shape right now. This, coupled with our Zappitelli’s food after your round, makes for one enjoyable experience.
We look forward to seeing you out here today!
The Staff at StoneWater Golf Club!
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From: Little Mountain Country Club <This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it.>
Date: October 7, 2015 at 5:52:16 PM EDT
To: Patty Gaston <This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it.>
Subject: StoneWater Golf Club Member For A Day
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Attention Golfers,
Have you heard about what’s going on at StoneWater Golf Club this Fall and 2016??? You do not want to miss out on this unbelievable offer!
Right now, we are in the middle of our biggest Membership Drive all year. We want YOU to experience what we have to offer at StoneWater and also find out about our exciting Membership offerings for 2016. Effective immediately, and running for the rest of the season, we will be offering our Member for a Day opportunity to you for only $45 cart included plus tax.
ook your round now. Upon check-in, you will also be able to learn about information for next year as part of your Member for a Day Experience. If the time that you are looking for is not available, feel free to contact the StoneWater Golf Shop to check on further availability.
With the tremendous Fall weather that we’ve had, our early Fall aerification healed over perfect. The greens are in fantastic shape right now. This, coupled with our Zappitelli’s food after your round, makes for one enjoyable experience.
We look forward to seeing you out here today!
The Staff at StoneWater Golf Club!
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